Wow! I can't believe it took me a year to make this chapter. But it was worth it!
I really love that Ebony Box goes on even if it's slow.
This chapter was planned but didn't go as I expected. As you can see, chapter 4 had Jenna in the title page and chapter 5 had Adri... As I first planned it we were supposed to see a lot of Jenna in chapter 4 and a lot of Adri in chapter 5. Ideas do shift... I added stuffs that postponed planned events again. It will be like this most of the time. So from now on, the title page will be pretty random; it doesn't have to match the chapter content.(Although I would love it to)
I was thinking of adjusting or changing some things like Ebony's last name. Her last name was "Hart". I might change it to something else. I don't know what yet, but I'm still looking. I don't think changing her name is a big deal since it was mentioned only once or twice. There's no particular reason to that. I just feel this last name didn't fit her well...
Page 21: Jenna looks a bit different because of the hair. Originally I wanted to draw Jenna with the same hairstyle all the time but I thought that it'll be more realistic to change it oftenly. Because she's a girl who's into fashion and appearances she had to do things with her hair.
I love Mcdonald which is why they had to be eating in Mcdonald! LOL!
There is not much to say about this chapter, I may add more notes to this page if I think of more to say...
Thank you for reading chapter 5.
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